Showing posts with label The Right to Write. Show all posts
Showing posts with label The Right to Write. Show all posts

Monday, November 5, 2012

Six Words Can Say It All



"They who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night."
Edgar Allan Poe
Eleonora






"I believe that we are meant to move through the world with interest, and writing keeps me interested.
It is like comparing notes."
Julia Cameron
The Right to Write



     This quarter begins  our study of the short story and to kick-off the section students wrote six-word stories, a concept made famous by Ernest Hemingway when he wrote-

For sale: baby shoes, never used.

Here are a few student examples:

Angels are my type of thing.
Carly McGirt

Finally flying so high, I fell.
William Lampke

Falling in reverse is very confusing.
Ella Rosenberg

Lemurs go swimming, crocodiles get full.
Ian Fisher

Man killed by Subway at dinner.
Mike Guinn

He thought he could swim. Sinking...
Christian Giglia

Rides roller coaster, sleeps in hospital.
Sophia Kalyuzhnaya

Paperboy missing? Didn't hear the news.
Alexander Jones

Best cantrip: sing yourself to sleep.
Emma Carter

     Another assignment asked students to write a paragraph using a first line from one of Edgar Allan Poe's short stories. Here are two examples: 

     Misery is manifold. It is too much to handle. People. Making others mad and sad is not what we are made for. Why can't we work on an agreement to make things right, and not make hate the thing between families around the planet?
-Jake Dudzik

It was a chilly November afternoon. I saw it, small and insignificant to some. But not to me. It was a shining beam of hope. I picked up the small diamond ring and put it in my pocket. If I sell it, I may have just enough money to get to America.
-Emma Carter




Words of the Week
click on word for definition

recusant
delate
uncanny
teratoid
cantrip

Sunday, September 2, 2012

A New Day

"Why should we write? We should write because it is human nature to write. We should write because writing brings clarity and passion to the act of living. We should write because writing is good for the soul."
The Right to Write



A sampling of student work from week one:




AlphabetamericA
by John Chirchirillo

America
became
confused,
dumb,
evil,
fat,
greedy,
"heroes"
in
justifying
killing
loving
mammals.
Now
our
propensity
questionably
resembles
self-
terrorizing
ulteristic
vultures
wanting
xenogenetic
zealousness.


Everyday
by Madeline Keller

Everyday. People
pray. Scared
of sin. Don't
let it in. Here
we wait. Hiding
hate. Afraid
to die. And
face our fate.


Warfare
by Cuinn McDermott

War destroys life
Air warfare is full of unknown danger
Rarely do people come back unchanged
From all countries arise war
All war is foolish
Red blood covers the ground
Everyone is gone


America
by Sara Cazorla

Amazing birds chirping
Miracle wishes
Excellent people
Remembering sweet memories
Interesting thoughts
Clapping hands
Applause all over the world


Music
by David King

Making tones always
United across the world
Sadly auto tuned
Intervention for musicians
Classy people lose it


Celebrity
by Darian Bolten

Constant fans, screaming
Electrifying crowds
Liars happen a lot
Even more end up doing drugs
Big movie stars
Reacting when something happens to them
International fame and fortune
Too many break ups and make-ups
Yes, they can live normal lives


An Abcdarium
by Isaac Catchatoorian

Among this sad world,
Boisterous beings (although very rare)
Claim themselves: never bored

Denoting the negative,
Enriching our lives,
Furthering the positive

Gratefully living,
Hoping for the best,
Intellectually perceiving,
Jokingly being

Kindness is their key
Loving all those 'round
Motivating us to try
New things we see

Opening our minds
People come together
Questioning why one doesn't like another

Running to the finish
Stopping no time soon
Turn back now
U will be sad when you lose

Venturing to new heights
Worrying not about fail
X-emplifying true leaders
Young,
Zealous beings who will always care



Celebrity
by Emma Carter

Constantly fighting
Everyone is watching
Lights always flashing
Even the best can fall
Being so well known can
Ruin your spirit
Integrity is rare
Trust is scarce
Your worth is in the hands of the world



Alphabet poem
By Elizabeth Hemingway

A
dults think they know everything. I just don't understand them. For example, they love
B
abies. I can't imagine why? They can't do anything and everyone loves them just
C
uz they're babies. But they're useless
D
uh.
E
veryone knows that all they're good
F
or is crying, sleeping, and
G
awking aimlessly at things.
H
ow is that cute?
I
don't know why adults are so hung up on them, they only turn into to toddlers who
J
ump on the furniture and make a huge mess of everything. Like my cousin mickey
K
now what else I hate about toddlers? They get away with everything because they're
L
ittle. "Oh..little Mickey couldn't have done that.."
M
ickey didn't know any better" "Mickeys just too little to know its wrong.
N
o, he's EVIL.. Did you ever think that maybe he understands perfectly?
O
r that he's waiting to strike again?
P
lease, adults never think things through. But I know the truth. I'll get him to
Q
uit his evil doing once and for all!
R
ight after I get out of time out. Right now I'm forced to just
S
it here waiting for him to strike. Nothing else to do but watch the
T
imer...
U
gh... I just know he's out there, laughing at me. It's his fault. He messed with the
V
acuum cleaner, not me.
W
ell... guess who got blamed? Me. He just does whatever he wants. Like breaking my
X
-men action figures. Then if I fight back, he frames me, and no matter how much I
Y
ell that I'm innocent, they don't listen. Well... He better not be playing with my toy
Z
ebra. I will stop him, one day I will stop evil doing. I swear. After the timer rings that is...


The power of words
By Elizabeth Hemingway

Words are powerful
They can bring you up with one sentence
Just as easily as they can take you down

They can make you feel on top of the world
And they can crush your hopes and dreams
Break your spirit

But the happiest words of all
Are "I love you" from the mouth of the one
Most close to you
And the words that hurt the most
The ones that can change your life
Are those two so very small yet so very powerful words
"Good bye"